In this essay, I need to discuss the following two sections. I particularly need to focus on these 5 social determinants of health which are lack of financial support, social support networks
employment, healthcare services, and stigma and discrimination.
1. How Social Determinants of Health Affect HIV?
Vulnerability to HIV and the progression of HIV, in particular, are influenced by social determinants of health. Risk of contracting HIV is greater among individuals who are subject to homelessness, general lack of financial resources, social support networks, unemployment, lack of accessing to health care services, and social exclusion caused by stigma, cultural differences and discrimination in the forms of racism, sexism, homophobia, heterosexism or ageism.
2. Responding to the Social Determinants of Health- Discuss how address these four social determinants of health in the prevention and control of HIV.
Addressing all of the social determinants of health is a key strategy in ending the HIV epidemic. Ensuring that basic human needs, such as employment, shelter, food, education, and social inclusion, are met will significantly prevent the transmission of HIV and lessen its impact on people living with the virus.
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